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Monday, April 5, 2010

D is for Debris

The fabulous Falen had a writing prompt contest a little whiles back, and in my hemming and hawing about what to post today Sonshine said, "Ooh! Post your short story!" So I figured I would.
*Update*
Due to the Author's Borderline Skitsifrenia the short story has been removed. But here's a pretty picture:



9 comments:

Cheri Chesley said...

Very interesting! Thanks for posting :)

AchingHope said...

Thank you Cheri, and thanks for commenting :)

Falen said...

...did you photoshop that diary picture? Because it is amazing!

Caledonia Lass said...

Wow! I like that! You've quite easily put so much information into a short piece. Makes me wish it was longer so I could learn even more. :D

Jayne said...

Hello! Nice story - my favourite bit was him seeing his grey hair in the puddle. :)

Christine Danek said...

Love your descriptions--excellent. I really enjoyed this.
Thanks for sharing.

Raquel Byrnes said...

Great short. Loved the description about how it felt like moldy bread...yech!

AchingHope said...

@Falen: Kinda'. I guess. Glad you liked it :D

Thank you everyone for your encouraging comments :)

Blam said...

Gah! I need a chemical bath.